indigoApe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Animation Challenge Wk1-3]

Great

Week 1 - Rudy
Week 2 - ChillyPhilly
Week 3 - ChillyPhilly

Rudy responds:

Thank you for your vote! Sorry that it will not be counted due to the rules of the contest. Voting ended at 7:00am Eastern Time!

[Vague mind]

Keep it up

This is pretty nicely put together, though very short.
Add color and music to emphasize on certain aspects of the piece.

I have to disagree with lazyguy69 when he said you needed a plot, you had a plot, it was the stream of consciousness.

I have to say I envy you for your skill in fbf. Good work, keep it up and dont let negative reviews get you down. Learn from them and keep going. =]

paragsid responds:

Thanx dude... it was a real booster.. thanx for sticking to me.. you are really sweet... this was just a try... there's nothing to envy in me, i'm just a beginner.

[mega-mation]

Better than most stick animations.

This is better than most stick animations, but a still a stick animation...I know flash isn't easy and you could lose patience quickly, but you can do more than this. There is so much talent here, i just can't see why you don't spend a little more time on full bodies and create some amazing stuff. I know it'll be a lot harder, and it'll take much longer, but it could be very satisfying to know you've brought your game up.

The animation itself is good, i enjoyed the cookie part. The fights were very well animated. The music was well chosen and fit right in with the piece.

36 seconds was the perfect length for this. I can't tell you how many times I've come across stick movies lasting up to 3 minutes of the same repetitive stuff. This had variety and I liked it.

Keep up the good work, bring your game up if you can. <3

Mesmay responds:

Thank you.
Ive tried fb, but I kinda suck at it.
Ill give it a go.

[Time in a Bottle]

Creative

Wow, had I been as creative in the making of "Anamnesis" I wouldn't think it was so overrated.

The way you put everything together was beautiful. The way everything flowed through was great. The animation was smooth and simple. The music was very well chosen, the animation and music went hand in hand.

Hope to see more from you ( =O no submissions in '07)
Chris.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

No, no submissions in 07, I'm afraid. I was almost done with this a few weeks ago, but I needed some more time to myself (Without the constant talking to people online)

xD I found this song through a CD at the library, and I started seeing things that I could animate for it.
Anyway, I won't dissapoint.

-GKG

[iPhone]

Gets me everytime!

Animation-wise, this isn't all that great, but I know it's not easy coming up with detailed drawings. So good work anyway.

The sound could've been clearer, but i suppose you had to make use of what you had.

The script is hilarious though, so it covers up most negative points.

Great short, 8/10.

theblackkangaroo responds:

thanks!